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Life's not easy, love's not real
I can't explain the way I feel
Time heals pain but pain is time
Smiles hurt too bad, laughter's a crime
Tears are always there for me
And I could cry myself a sea
Sadness doesn't go away
At least I have anger too today
Life sucks, no different phrasing there
I wish there was a world where
Things could turn out differently
Sometimes I wish that so intently
That I get lost within my mind
Looking for something I'll never find
©2005-2009 `BerylAlexandros
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This is a poem I just wrote about - no surprise - depression.

As of 10/14/2008, A PLEA:
If you read this, please read at least one other of my deviations. This is not my best work; it's not even particularly close to being my best work. I understand that it's something a lot of people can identify with, but I also strongly feel that it's been getting more attention than it deserves. So PLEASE, read something else too! Thank you.

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:iconlovinhim4life:
nice, very nice.

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:icontepara:
Thats very well wrighten.

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:iconathelwulf:
I feel like that sometimes ... not lately though. Very good! :D

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Meine Hoffnung ist geschwunden und zerschlagen
Aber ich hoffe, wo es keine Hoffnung mehr gibt
Wie der Blödmann, der Scheißkerl, der ich bin

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:iconberylalexandros:
Thanks :) And I'm glad you haven't been feeling like that lately.

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:iconathelwulf:
Yup, love does that to ya. :D

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Meine Hoffnung ist geschwunden und zerschlagen
Aber ich hoffe, wo es keine Hoffnung mehr gibt
Wie der Blödmann, der Scheißkerl, der ich bin

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:iconredtailedhawk:
Reminds me of myself when things get rough and I lose control over pretty much everything.
I'm glad depression dosen't effect me that often. ^^;

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:iconeladriewen:
Unfortunately, literature and prose are an unappreciated genre here on Dev, but I think this is magnificent! :thumbsup: It really describes how people feel at times; I know I can certainly relate.

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:iconberylalexandros:
Thanks! Sorry it's been so long since you commented; my computer was broken.

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When life gives you lemons, write about it.
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:iconberylalexandros:
Thanks. I know what you mean about literature being unappreciated, although it's never really bother me. It seems like not a lot of people appreciate it, but those who do appreciate it a lot. So maybe it evens out.

Sorry it's been so long since you commented; my computer was broken.

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