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Would that I had been suckled by wolves
in the kind of world where we belong
paths pounded through soil and forest
repeating the same simple steps
the sun also rises

As kisses go, I will not forget that one
how extraordinarily dangerous love is
a soft wind whispers sweet nothings
down the corridors of the prison that I return to
my heart paraphrases: I changed everything
for you

The faith we have
this is what church is supposed to be
begging the question of the chicken and the egg
you found God; I saw people sleeping under bridge abutments
and the prison where inmates had stood in the rising water for days
a human voice cut off in mid-sentence
one can get aroused by such prayer leaders

We entered the rebel zone
would that I could defy them all
I’m just looking out my window
emerging from the social fabric
nothing heard but the sound of the chickens coming home
to roost

Make checks payable to salvation
Superman was a little boy
his blood was bright scarlet
if the child saw rightly
heaven should be at least an echo chamber

Trapped in the driver’s seat
struggling in my cage
I blame my parents, which is trite but traditional
I struggled to keep up with the haze
what’s left over after I subtract the fact that my arm goes up
from the fact that I raise my arm?
I am delivered from Plato’s cave

Whatever song the sirens sang
six years after stepping onto the troubled shore
they do not live in the fear of oppression and violence
eating Superman’s heart, sold for eight dollars a ton
researchers will not be awarded a Nobel prize if Earth is consumed
endless reasons to die, an irrelevant story

His smiles and good manners
are a mask to cover his brutal and vicious goal of your destruction
a ruthlessness gene
who can blame these men, motionless in a row?
it is not difficult to kill a baby
blood all over the ground
theoretically proven Russian roulette
keep your mouth shut and look contrite

We are to learn from one another and tell our stories
the echoed communication
behind the eyes that are reading these words
I was just feeling empty, helpless and missing
lying amid the scrub

Would it be fair to say
we can’t tickle ourselves
it is neither nature nor nurture
when we do take a stand
gathered around the victims
it is beautiful
©2008-2009 `BerylAlexandros
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Author's Comments

This is for *Laurence55's found poetry workshop at *Writers-Workshop.

I took everything from the June 2008 issue of Harper's Magazine. It was a little bit harder than expected, and I'm disappointed that I didn't get to use all of the passages that I wanted to, but it was a cool exercise and I'm relatively pleased with the outcome.

If anyone is curious about which specific articles specific lines come from, just ask. It would be too tedious to list them all.

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I struggled to keep up with the haze
what’s left over after I subtract the fact that my arm goes up
from the fact that I raise my arm?
I am delivered from Plato’s cave


I like the references from this this poem draws its lifeblood. And yet illustrates it with such lucidity. A fine example to ancient learning in context of a modern civilization.

Smile.

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Places Don't Exist
:iconberylalexandros:
Thank you for the comment :) I'm glad that the poem means something to you... I was worried that it would seem too jumbled to people.

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This is awesome! I noticed two tiny things-

researchers will not be award a Nobel prize if Earth is consumed

I think you have a typo here - awarding*? awarded*?

are a mask to cover his brutal and vicious goal of your destruction

I think you should cut either 'brutal' or 'vicious' from this line, it's a little wordy and redundant right now.

Anyway, I really like this poem. It's very cool. I read it as a well-written, awesomely angsty portrait of western society. Great work :D

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Ah indeed, it should be awarded rather than award. Silly me and my typos!

As for the other line, I think that I'll leave it as it is... but that you for giving your opinion :)

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just read your notes before I've read the poem. I read Harper's as often as I can. What was on the cover of that issue? I'll be back once I finish reading..

ah yes! I remember this issue! the line, "researchers will not be awarded a Nobel prize if Earth is consumed,"
is one I remember from a letter written against the construction of the crazy photon accelerator. You've got a pretty impressive collection here, and your gathering of your findings is wonderfully cohesive and meaningful. Thanks for sharing!

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:orange: PEACE
:iconberylalexandros:
Thanks for the comment!

It was really interesting, once I got reading, how many bits there were that I wanted to use. It's an awesome magazine, isn't it? I'd kind of like to do this found poetry thing again with other issues, although it took an insane amount of time to sift through it for what I wanted to use so I'm not sure. Still, it's a wonderful source of inspiration!

And yeah, that photon accelerator (called a Large Hadron Collider) is a pretty freaky thing, isn't it? After I read that article I heard on the news that they're going to start operation with it really soon, like next month. So keep your fingers crossed, I guess.

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When life gives you lemons, write about it.
~~
Is there a deviation in your or a friend's gallery that you have reason to believe I'll like? Tell me!
~~
I am a proud staff member of *WordCount. Check it out!
:icon8ankh:
haha. not sure what my fingers would be crossed for at this point. I was thinking of using a Harper's for this exercise, but went with the mag I picked up and started in on first. In the future, fro srue! I dug on this type of work. Real rewarding.

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:orange: PEACE
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cool. I love the imagery. even though some of them I think don't make much sense or maybe I just don't get everything (but i did understand a lot of it) or maybe not all of it is suppose to have a meaning..ehh! I'm no genius hehe. its beautiful. I'm a big fan of surrealism, dada, beat, stuff like that. I just like it when I watch, look or read about stuff that tickles my brain. Even if sometimes It hurts my head. lol!
I guess it gives me a kind of high that most chemist can't offer. lol!

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“Death, the only immortal who treats us all alike, whose pity and whose peace and whose refuge are for all—the soiled and the pure, the rich and the poor, the loved and the unloved.” —Twain’s last written statement
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This is such a gorgeous found poem. I'm really impressed with your patience and thoughtfulness in putting together such a long, and well-constructed poem.

I love everything about it. The imagery was wonderful. I loved the unexpected surprises...I didn't expect to see any mention of superman, but he came up a couple of times. I love when pop culture mixes with elegant poetry so well. Really nice job!

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it's spring when the world is puddle-wonderful

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